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I woke up this morning with an uneasy feeling-I have no idea why-I felt the tears swell up in my eyes then gently glide down my cheek. I felt silly, more than silly, down right moronic for feeling this way. I have been unable to shake the thought that something in life, my heart, had been ripped out. I felt myself slipping in and out of these agonising trances of pain. It has been almost a week that I’ve been feeling this way, ever since Naruto, Kakashi and I came back from our mission against Akatsuki to save Gaara. A lot happened during that mission, but nothing that I think is responsible for me feeling this way. I have come to accept that grandma Chio is gone and not coming back but that doesn’t help me, I still have no idea why I feel like dying. Maybe if I try to get some more sleep I will feel better, I’ve been lying awake all night.

The softness of my bed wasn’t going to be enough to get myself to sleep but I was trying to force it apon myself. I could feel the cool breeze of konoha brush my skin from my open window and a shiver crawled up my spine. At that moment, I felt another pile of thick, comforting, blankets wrap around my snuggled body. I froze in place-not even aware of the cold-and tilted my head slightly to the open space beside my bed. I forced my eyes to follow the dark shadow’s body up to its face. As another gust of icy wind passed by, the light sound of a bell filled the otherwise quiet room; I recognised the sound. Akatsuki. But witch one has come to take their revenge on me? Did it matter, I was going to die and I don’t think I mind. I reached the face of my cold-hearted visitor and saw his bronze-red hair blow over his mesmerising eyes from under his hat that covered the remainder of it. It couldn’t be. It wasn’t possible. What bothered me the most was the fact that the siring pain I have been feeling for a week subsided at the sight of his face. Sasori.

I prepared myself to scream but before I was even able to open my mouth, his dark figure turned into a blur and he was behind me. He slid his inhuman yet soft palm over the side of my jaw and clamped over my trembling lips. Before I knew it, his other murderous hand was gliding passed my back and around my waist, making it unable to move.

“Didn’t mean to wake you. Sakura, was it?” his lips slid against my ear as he addressed me. “It’s been a while, did you miss me?”

At that moment, my body stiffened as I realised, I had. I had been missing him this whole time. I’ve been missing his cold voice, the soft loathing in his eyes, his red-brown silk hair and all his inhuman qualities. The feel of his hand leaving my mouth and lying on my cheek interrupted my train of thought, he turned me to his direction, and his eyes read my face and he knew at that instant.

“Glad to see I left an impression” I attempted to speak.

“Y-you’re a-alive?” as the words left my mouth, I wished I had remain quiet, he didn’t kill me yet but he was sure to now. It took me a few seconds to notice- I was busy thinking over my life as my last thoughts- that he had pushed me against my pillow and was now leaning over me with a wooden hand on ether side of my body. He leaned inward towards me.

“Want me to prove it?” His voice sounded teasing but his face looked certain of my answer, Yes. The look of certainty overpowered his face, he didn’t wait for my answer. He leaned more inward, closing the small gap between our faces as he pressed his soft menacing lips against mine. The movement was not one of aggression as I was expecting; it was gentle and passionate. The lack of response from me began to aggravate the motion of his lips. They began to force mine open, and they followed. He slid his tongue into my mouth and repeated the same breath-taking motion over and over. A bolt ran through me as my crave for him became stronger but I knew I had to pull away. I lifted my arms up and planted my hands on his chest, pushing him. It took him half a second to grab my wrists and bound them to my bed, this act was much more aggressive then the others. He was far from through with me. He pulled his lips from mine and brought them back to my ear. He chuckled lightly before he spoke. “See, I am alive, no thanks to you of course.” I wanted to answer back, I wanted to protest, but I couldn’t-I couldn’t even remember my name. “ Say something” I lied there, frozen. “That wasn’t a suggestion.”

“H-how?” I could feel mountains of tears overflow from my eyes. He pressed his lips to my cheek and caught my falling tears, he released my arms as I wrapped them around his neck.


TO BE CONTINUED…
One of my favorite ships is sakura and sasori so i thought that i should try to write a fan fic. my very 1st one ^^ i hope it's alright!!
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:iconmicky3232:
micky3232 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
awesome
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:iconpuppetedcosplay:
PuppetedCosplay Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sasosak ey? Cool. Never realised people ship us two...

~ Sasori No Daana
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coolcat112 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
😵😵😵😵😵😵
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TheRedFlowerLover Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Student Photographer
EEEEEEEEEEEEK
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RosesandThorns0135 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
um I love monkeys.... and SasoSak too X D
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SasukeTheHotty Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
That Was Really Good!
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brokenxpromisses Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
I love it!!!
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:iconnoein1girl:
noein1girl Featured By Owner May 12, 2011   General Artist
woot they deffinately belong with each other
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:iconi-luv-dei:
i-luv-dei Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011
i love it too much....must.....fav....
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ajlions1977 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2011
0////0 wow
this is really good
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Raintalon03 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011
dont even watch/read naruto any more.....But I like it! ^ ^
Tis super good!!
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SexyVampire102 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
holy crap that was so good!!!!
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NaruIno23 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011
More!!!! :)
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:iconkokoriane:
Kokoriane Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
Need...More...Of your...Fanfic! Please I beg you!
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:iconforbiddenlove25545:
ForbiddenLove25545 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2010
Oh my gosh! I can't sa anything other than, I love it!
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:iconchyou-chan:
Chyou-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
make more its amazing o.o!
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:iconviolet-souka:
violet-souka Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sweet
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:iconherro-im-yerrow:
herro-im-yerrow Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
great job for a first time. i suck at writing so it's hard for me :(
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sasori-my-man Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2010
omfg i just love this couple!! i was reading so intensly i almost screamed when it said " TO BE CONTIUED"!!!! can't wait to read more!!!!! (i totally thought that sasori would be more aggressive and would, like, almost rape sakura!!)
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:icondream-seker:
dream-seker Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010
Muahahahaw oh there will be RAPE >:D
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:iconsasori-my-man:
sasori-my-man Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010
heheheee i know this sounds uber pervy but...umm... I CAN'T WAIT!!! whens the next one out??? ...... or is it already out??????????????????????? :heart: :heart: =D
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:icondream-seker:
dream-seker Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010
Chapter 2 is out :]
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:iconsasori-my-man:
sasori-my-man Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010
ok i'll go out and find your story of love, hate and rape!!!!
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:iconsoftkit:
Softkit Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009  Student Writer
are you going to right more? i really think you should. :icondragonhiplz:
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:icondream-seker:
dream-seker Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2009
There is part 2 XD
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:iconsoftkit:
Softkit Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2009  Student Writer
its really good. i like it alot
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:iconcemeblack:
CemeBlack Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2009
I love it...it is excellent:-)
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DarkShadowSoul Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2009
that was cool! sasosaku is sweet. :-)
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:iconnayikani:
nayikani Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009
arg there is no cahp 2 >///<
can't wait ;D
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:iconnayikani:
nayikani Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2009
wow this was really good :DD
a-n-d i like your pics too xDDD
i'm now going to read chap 2 :]
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:icondream-seker:
dream-seker Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2009
GO READ CPT 2!!
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phoenixflame7 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
Nice fanfic! I love it!
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chesspiece-king1 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009
great job, loved every bit of it
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Golden-Phoenix0-0 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2009
u should write the next one!!! i wanna read it!!!
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:icondream-seker:
dream-seker Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2009
Go read chapter 2!!
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gaaraxloverx4ever Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2009  Student
two words...awesomley AWESOME!!!! its like a wow factor lol plz continue!!
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phoenixXsenju Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009
woooo awesome fanfic!!!
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:icongigicerisier:
Gigicerisier Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
Hooray! New SasoSaku fanfic! Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for writing a fanfic for my OTP coupling in Naruto! *waves SasoSaku OTP coupling flag*
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:icondream-seker:
dream-seker Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008
Yay, I was afraid ppl wouldent like it!!
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:icongigicerisier:
Gigicerisier Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008
>Yay, I was afraid ppl wouldent like it!!

Well your fanfic is well-written so I'm sure people would like it unless they don't like Sakura. *wide grin*
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:icondream-seker:
dream-seker Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008
Ha ha, that's so true XD but Sakura is pretty cool now
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:icongigicerisier:
Gigicerisier Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008
>Ha ha, that's so true XD but Sakura is pretty cool now

Yeah but sadly still quite many people dislike her... *sighs*
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:icondream-seker:
dream-seker Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008
Oh well. =D Lol we are having a conversation on a comment box!!
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:icongigicerisier:
Gigicerisier Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2008
>Oh well. =D Lol we are having a conversation on a comment box!!

Well if you wanna we can chat in my co-own SasoSaku chatroom. Just send me a note then I will chat with you. *wide grin*
[link]
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